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All OC pic (SCALE IS WRONG D:)

Published: Jan 6, 2014

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_{All my active ocs...LOL LONG DESCRIPTION

I need critique on them. so the names by the OCs are there,
so if you thinm one of the ocs are terrible just say and ill accept a KIND critique c: have a nice day
PLEASE GIVE CRITIQUES ON THE OCS NOT THE ARTWORK. i know what i need to work on. thank you.

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Full name: Killianda (Killy-and-dra)
Gender: Female
Species: Dragon
Age: 2,060
Sexuality: unknown
Native language: Growling/whimpering
Height: 6ft
Weight: 14st
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Full name: Zkula (Zkull-ah)
Gender: Female
Species: Dragoballian
Age: 27,000
Sexuality: straight
Native language: Columbian/English
Height: 2ft 5"
Weight: 3st
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Full name: Fushie (Fooshie)
Gender: Male
Species: Foxballian
Age: 4,000
Sexuality: gay
Native language: English
Height: 2ft
Weight: 2st 5lb
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Full name: Amy (Shade) (not drawn yet)
Gender: Female
Species: Absol
Age: 20
Sexuality: straight
Native language: English. American accent
Height:
Weight:
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Full name: Abbie
Gender: Female
Species: HTF Fox
Age: 13
Sexuality: Straight/Metrosexual
Native language: English
Height: 5ft 4"
Weight: 8st 5lb
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Full name: Mouse
Gender: Male
Species: Griffen
Age: 32
Sexuality: unknown
Native language: *SQUEAK*
Height: 12 ft/40ft long
Wing span: 20ft
Weight: 34 st
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Full name: Mariona (Ma-re-oh-na)
Gender: Female
Species: Everobz
Age: 29
Sexuality: metrosexual
Native language: Everobkeo
Height: 4ft 4"
Weight: 6st
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Full name: Folke (Vol-kuh-rai)
Gender: Male
Species: Shaowin
Age: 27
Sexuality: bisexual
Native language: Zulu
Height: 7ft 6"
Weight: 17st (hes a fatty)
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Full name: Xion (Kion)
Gender: male
Species: Mutant Bird/Insect
Age: 22
Sexuality: Gay
Native language: chirps/clicks
Height: 2ft
Weight: 1st
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Full name: Dez (Des)
Gender: Male
Species: Gummy
Age: Unknown
Sexuality: Straight
Native language: Goomyian
Height: 1ft 2"
Weight: 6.5 lb
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Full name: Fluffle
Gender: Male
Species: Spark doomer
Age: 16
Sexuality: Straight
Native language: Doomer
Height: 7"
Weight: 2.28lb
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Full name:Shaunti (Shant-ey)
Gender: Female
Species: Fire doomer
Age: 29
Sexuality: Straight
Native language: Doomer
Height: 1.5ft
Weight: 5.66lb
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Full name: Zeleo (Zeh-leo)
Gender: Female
Species: Spirit
Age: 500
Sexuality: straight
Native language: unknown
Height: 5ft 2"
Weight: 4st 4lb
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Full name: Felek (Feh-lek)
Gender: Male
Species: Spirit
Age: 510
Sexuality: Straight
Native language: Unknown
Height: 5ft 6"
Weight: 4st 7lb
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Full name: Theo
Gender: Male
Species: Cat
Age: 6
Sexuality: Metero
Native language: Cat
Height: 1ft 4"
Weight: 1st
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Full name: Votex (For-tecks)
Gender: Female
Species: Tribal Eagle
Age: 15 (eagle years)
Sexuality: unknown
Native language: unknown
Height: 3ft
Weight:3st

you may need to press the download button to see them all clearly ;v; heh}

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gamelovar

Jan 8, 2014

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its great i love how you did it i love how one is a goomy oc and some are just plain random but if you want my opinion .... try to add a bit more color to em darkie.... i love your art and stuff they're amazing! i see no flaws whatsoever but that little thing! and yup thats all ..... <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b…" width="15" height="15" alt="

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(Big Grin)"/> ;w; ^^ your great at everything darkie you just gotta set your mnd too it and yea thats about it XD but i just need 16 words left so im just gonna be random .... omg yay XD <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/d/d…" width="21" height="15" alt="

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